• Randy

  

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  Re: Ok editors, i would like some feedback on this...

  Sun, March 11, 2007 - 11:00 AM

  Overall the piece was not interesting enough for me to watch the whole thing through.
  
  It moved too slow.
  
  I would choose a different font.
  
  
  Brutal honesty from your tribal peer.

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• • WTL

    

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    Re: Ok editors, i would like some feedback on this...

    Sun, March 11, 2007 - 10:37 PM

    I agree.
    
    This should be a minute long (ish). I'd drop the falling letters - they materialize onscreen *then* fall.
    
    EditEditEdit. ;-)
    
    Keep at it!

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